tailor

Halfway between romantic and just plain horny! It almost made ME wet!

It appears you began with the idea of poetry-as-clothing, and meandered to other things as clothing. It works. It transitions smoothly and rolls us along like a leaf on a stream. The only hiccup I noticed was "pearl buttons of hands"; I think just "pearl button hands" would work better, but in any case, it's a nice piece.

Alcuin