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Vivid slice of real life and I dig it, I like my life being understood and articulately displayed by another writer. 
Only thing I might change is "ate" to "eat," as I think it's the only past tense verb in the piece and it takes me out of the flow. Also, I think "take out" needs a hyphen, take-out.
I, too, appreciate the sound of the word, "rubbish." Seems rather British or Aussie. I really dig accents.
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- » Callooh on Apr. 8 2008 - Tracey:you know I wrote it only for you.....sometimes even ...
by Tracey on Apr. 7 2008