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Some really fabulous lines in here Amanda.
I do wonder about this:
"Yes, I loved her
burning silently"
It seems a bit odd, the idea of her burning... though i realize it's you burning. Im' not sure you want both of you burning there but seriously that was the first thing that popped in my head.
I do wonder about this:
"Yes, I loved her
burning silently"
It seems a bit odd, the idea of her burning... though i realize it's you burning. Im' not sure you want both of you burning there but seriously that was the first thing that popped in my head.
by Anstey on Mar. 13 2008