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A serious question: Why is this not a poem?
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I can think of a few, as listed below:
1 - it's just too crap to be poetic
2 - it's no more than a statement, no sense of HOW the cow chews, what type of grass or even where in Vermont!!!
3 - And I think this is the most important - where's the hook, something to draw the reader in? Nothing, zip, nada, etc.
Just one hack's opinion.
Mos.
by Mosquitobyte on Feb. 29 2008