Smothered in my Sleep

Thank you for your wonderful input! I am always open to suggestions and critiques, workshopping is something I love. I have made some changes so, what do you think now?? The headache did go away, just as soon as the fog lifted. I have no clue why fog gives me a headache. I can also tell when the honeysuckle blooms because I wake up with a headache.  

----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?