on the topic of love

Jazz, I think the linebreaks are a bit overmuch. I love several stretches of this except for the breaks. the first stanza is wonderful, though I think 'we poets' or just 'you know how poets are'

Also, I don't like the 'and' to start S4. I liked the ands through  S2, the sort of hypnotic list worked well, but in S4 it just feels extraneous.