SURFACING ON ETERNITY

I actually agree with the author's note at the end. The irony is that the note made me rethink the poem in a more ironic comedic way and wonder if that was intentiona. Regardless, It seemed a over-much to me. I hard trouble pushing through. I don't generaly dislike long poetry, but this seemed light on poetics and more a sort of universal-existential primal cry of some sort.