The constant need to pee

To be more serious, this writing shows some serious growth Shan. It's a very nice move upward and onward. I really like it, the lines that nailed it for me are S1 L2,L3 -- this is the delicate setup that contrasts S2, then in S3, you go back to the more earthy delicate.. and instead of going for an expected punch line, you offer something touching, human and honest. All of this is neatly framed with a title that adds a context of good humor, which, I think increases the impact of the soft landing. I find this to be pretty mature writing. I enjoyed it a lot.