The Word on the Water

Some extremely cool sounds here Flash, especially "the bob and nod and dip on a long ocean trip" and "Fleeing believing and tricking deceiving" -- well, loads of bits really. 

I like the cyclical approach, kind of like "the word can neither be created nor destroyed" (sorry Newton) -- thinking about the flux will drive you nuts, which I suppose is why no writer is completely stable.  I am not sure whether I like this better as prose-ishness or if it would work lineated into more regular poetry -- I am probably going to come down on the side of "as is" though.