Lying in Bed Being Beautiful Next to You

This is a poignant piece that touched me in a soft and profound way. The title is wonderful, and I'm smitten with the first stanza. The last line is also superb.

I don't know why but I have mixed feelings about the goblet/water/lemon imagery; I need to reread this several times to figure that out and either realize I'm a total boob or come back with an idea that may or may not be useful to you.

Well done, Ann.