More in Shan's Crap (Shannon McEwen)
Complete in his Trust
A reworking of Saving the linens and the love
In the darkened house
A quarter past ten
Before the house settles in
He carries all fifty pounds
Of warm sleepy boy
To the potty
A drowsy voice
“I hate this”
Before a gruff response
“I know buddy”
His head bobs gently
Against a strong shoulder
As chocolate eyes slip closed
A quarter past ten
Before the house settles in
He carries all fifty pounds
Of warm sleepy boy
To the potty
A drowsy voice
“I hate this”
Before a gruff response
“I know buddy”
His head bobs gently
Against a strong shoulder
As chocolate eyes slip closed
- Shannon McEwen
Sharp like a wet noodle
on May 23 2007
from Canada
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1- Anstey
on May 23 2007
Saving the Linens and the love
I do think that's a big improvement. I'd be curious what other folks think.
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