This is just oozing with sweetness! My question comes in the next to they last stanza where you broke a line using 'usual'....the only problem with this particular word is that the reader reads it as two words, you know....the 'us' that means two of us...then when we get to the next line we have to stop and realize that the whole word is 'usual' and that really breaks the moment in time.
I do like the breaking up of one word between two lines....just not this particular word.
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!