2- Anstey
on June 25 2007
i would quibble with the cliche in S2, L4 on two grounds, first it's un-Ragenesquely un-creative, and second it's a cliche that many children probably wouldn't understand.
not that it's particularly unclear or that they couldn't figure it out, but more, why have them figuring out hackneyed phrases like 'different strokes for different folks' -- that's all I'm saying.
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- stephan
3- Jen
on June 26 2007
Thanks,
I fixed the middle stanza. Hope it works better.
1- Shan
on June 25 2007
in S3 L1 and L3 I stumbled a bit, it felt like there was a beat missing.
but like I said this is very catchy, I could almost sing it and I think it's going to stomp through my mind all day long!
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