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Translucent moonlight slips
from midnight skies,
whitewashes my salty moist skin
with splashes of light.
Beads of warm sweat trickle,
between winter white breasts,
stirrings arouse my calm center,
as we lie on a native bed
of sand and shell.

Tied loosely to moorings,
far off fishing boats bobble and creak.
The Atlantic murmurs;
channel markers faintly chime
under a spill of silver stars.

Quivering beneath this elegant canopy,
I reveal myself to bursts of dream light,
letting my flesh rhyme with yours.

The whimsical tide plays with the gulls;
a westerly breeze swishes
through sea oats and beach grass.
Your fragrance lingers among temperamental pleasures,
summon once calm waves
to crest again and again.

In the lavender-streaked dawn,
we search the sand
for tossed undergarments
and washed up shells
while beachgoers march towards the sea,
stomping on the sunbleached boardwalk,
smelling of sunscreen
and last night’s margaritas.

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1- Anstey on Mar. 1 2007

the long 'i' sound working through the first stanza creates a nice feeling in S1. I"m of two minds on the rhythm in S2, where the markers clang, those two lines there do offer a bit of a rhythmic break reminiscent of a beach moment, but I'm not sure I like it in this particular poem or not.


  • stephan

2- Anstey on Mar. 1 2007

I very much like that change.


  • stephan

3- Anstey on June 29 2007

where'd the poem go?


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  • stephan

4- Anstey on Nov. 18 2007

i like this.
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  • stephan