2- Leanne Hanson 
on Jul. 12 2009
You got it, Pags, you've loaded up on the prepositions -- there's a the or two waiting to be chopped out as well. I feel the second stanza is pushing the allusion a little too hard, although I do like the idea (by the way, "courteously"). I'll wait for round two 
1- Jones, Paganini
on Jul. 11 2009
Too many ands. I'll edit these out at some point...