We All Have a Breaking Point

Wow, Rene' I really felt this one.  The sound in this one works so well to contribute to the mood of the poem.  Also, the connection to the weather "it started as a low rumble..." - and, too, the voice and story-like feel, was awesome.  I felt like I was reading part of a short story.  "You know it's coming" - here, I felt fear for the character.  And compassion.  I truly love this poem, Rene'.  I can tell you put your whole soul in this one.

 --Manda