Ballade

Wow, that's beautifully written. I picked up on the

lyrical rhythm in your ballade, and your story within

this is written clearly and concisely.  Sometimes when

writing in a more difficult genre, the story can become

lost within the rhyme scheme, and a person can end up

with complete nonsense by the end of a piece.  I enjoyed reading

this Leanne:)  I think it was nice that you added the background and rhyme scheme of a ballade, that's always so helpful since the memory can fade if one doesn't always write in that genre.