Why I Write (revision)

I don't think I have ever met a suggestion that I did not want to entertain! I am game for anything when it comes to my writing, I am thick skinned, and an avid learner. I will give this a try and see if makes the poem stronger, vivid, and memorable.

As a matter of fact, I LOVE suggestions and critiques that turn my mind into another direction because it makes me look deeper, dig harder, and learn more. Thanks!! 

----- could someone turn the world back over, I'm getting dizzy!