Why I Write (revision)

I like this, it makes me think about why I write - which is pretty similar, not from pain neccessarily, but from a similar feeling of silent words (and wordless thoughts.) I think pags made some good suggestions, and I think I'd take it one step further: employ some animation in your adjectives, moving them away from the abstract description.  For instance, "sharpened fangs" could become "snarling fangs". Overall, though, I think you have a real winner here Rene.