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interesting sytax and imagery in this poem. I like what you're trying to do. Not that I really know what you're trying to do, but it's different than the usual run of the mill poetry on internet sites like this. I don't know if it's entirely successful in how it reads, haven't decided yet, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on it if you'd care to share them.
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