More in ink and green
ink and green
This is tender, delicate and sad. I think there are a few rough spots, but on the whole, I very much like it. The one spot that really tripped me was the lack of transition into the last stanza. THat might just be me being a bad audience..but still. you should know it happened to me. (so you can mock me)
- stephan
by Anstey on Mar. 13 2007