how our souls go to heave(n)

I had to read it a dozen times to get it, but it was worth it. It has relevance and a nice intrinsic beat. Your slant-meanings are exciting. The "lickless unswallowed" is unclear and did not work for me. I assume you mean something like 'immature' or 'incomplete'. It's really the only significant burp I found in this.

Songs of the 80 somethings? Hell, that's practically yesterday for me.

Alcuin