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Jeeze Kat, what's the matter with you? No chocolate? I guess marzipan will do. Perhaps I can imagine some extra dark around it. *sigh***

Very nice, my dear. One suggestion: L3: "Quixotic dreams, a spirit signs". The meaning remains clear, but the extra metric beat is eliminated. Other than that, the ballad meter is perfect, and fits the subject matter to a "T".

Alcuin

by Alcuin of York on Sep. 8 2007