The Grave of Henry Williamson

I like some of your word choices. "Impetus" maintains the rhythm nicely. On the other hand "on a corner" is a bit awkward rhythmically. Perhaps you would consider deleting the "a". As with so much of your work, it is technically very proficient, yet I must say that this particular piece left me unmoved. Yes, I did some background on Williamson to better grasp the subject matter and evaluate this write. However Alan, I honestly did not find this moved me at any level other than some of the language.

Alcuin