ergo sum

I was going to say something like, "Definitely one of the better of your 'dregs' category..." In fact, it doesn't even belong with most of them. This is very good, while most of those others are indeed either dregs, or barely readable, or perhaps merely unfinished. While I doubt that Socrates was actually bitter (if we can believe Plato), poetic license is allowed for poets.

The opening lines actually contain some subtle yet profound concepts. The line breaks throughout are uniformly spot on. And finally (and most important) the entire write makes us think, reflect, ponder. In the end, I think that is the most important purpose of writing poetry - to move us.

Alcuin