Fake it

Spelling typos, punctuation typos, no line breaks to help define this as poetry (and if it's not poetry, then as prose it should have capitalization, punctuation, etc.). I assume you mean a period after "fantasies".

About the only saving grace in this write is the odd passive voice that begins the 2^nd line. I'm not sure you intended its subtle implications, but it does work well.

Alcuin