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I like the title and the tone very much. I don't like the typos (sorry, I'm a pain like that), and I'm not sure about the format. It would help to know your intention: Do you mean this as a poem? As part of a memoir? Creative nonfiction? Context would help this reader.
Oh, and welcome to the monkey tree - EEP!
by Tracey on Jul. 18 2007