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I too like the concept of this, the insideous silence, ready to strike.
In "It circle overhead" you almost don't need the "it" becuase it's frimly established in my head anyway what is hovering.
I also think a bit more to sharpen the images would help.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shan on Jul. 12 2007