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Poetry sounds so differently from how I read it to myself, to how it sounds when the iambs are pointed out! Is this a wedding gift, Shan? What a nice tribute . . . the only suggestion I can muster is a really lame grammatical one . . . I think in L3 you want than, not then.
by White_Feather on June 24 2007