shallow

Wow!

I love the journey you take me on. At the star there was the (natural) assumption that this was about a small child. Then the discovery that this was (another) frog poem*. And finally the feeling that this is about some other being altogether, possibly even on another planet. If you told me it was the beginning of a short sci-fi or fantasy story I would believe you. Indeed I WANT the next installment!

And then there is the whole new layer of the metaphore.

Yes. This is a print off and keep one.

(*Is it frog week on this site but nobody told me? I have just read two frog poems one after the other and feel the need to write one of my own.)