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*chuckling* This is just the sort of poetry this site needs more of!
A tiny nit - there are two places where I think that a run-on line would add to the humour if you can make them work. - 'Err' could become 'err-or', and the word 'square' at the end of the penultimate line could become 'square-ness-
by Pags on June 4 2007