A Friend Is Someone Who Likes You

I think this is a bit too vanilla. One of the things I love most in yoru writing is when you're off the wall, gross, or absolutely silly. This, in my humble opinion, misses those marks.  If your intended market is very small children, it's certainly ok for that, but even there, I think your submerging your natural flare for goofy to the point where it'll hurt the marketability of the piece.I don't 'hate it' -- it didn't grab me though

Sue me..i like the booger monster

• stephan