8. rideo

Lotsa typos here: Thirty-pound; cellophane; bounds down; lying (not “laying”). You must have been distracted by the laughter.
This has a nice rhythm, like laughter in its pacing. I also like the last half better than the first – lots of energy and succinct phrasing. The only suggestion I have is for the last line in S3. Perhaps something like “lying rainbowed...(etc)” would work better.
Overall, nice write.
Alcuin