To criticise

I really like this Leanne, it's got a sort of classical air about it that appeals to me. I love the fish in the middle especially - that sort of equating of the small fish/small minded works for me, though I felt like maybe it could have been tied at the beginning/end - not sure how or even if that's a good idea, because i actually felt like the end was marvelously strong.  Of course, it speaks right into my deepest insecurities and self-loathing fears.