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acerbic

I like this, I like this one a lot. It reminds of someone and it probably does that for everyone. My only suggestion is in that there a few lines that don't drip off the tongue very easily. With a little modification though, it would read so smooth that the acerbic tone would more accessible.

ex.1

I said many things
many things I didn't
many things I meant to say
one of them: good riddance
ex. 2

 

I can't believe your smile
I don't believe your speech
I'll never understand hypocrisy
no matter how you preach

 

by Rene on May 4 2007