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Observing Zoology
Ok, it IS gross, but it's interesting gross. In fact, I think a bit more animal symbolism and an expansion of the idea might be in order. I liked very much teh interplay between teh first and second stanzas. The images are vivid and strong and I think get your point across pretty well.
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- stephan
by Anstey on May 3 2007