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I can't tell if the tide is coming or going
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Forgot to mention -- I caught the fisherman's smile; nice poetics, leaving room for inference.
Also thought about the '50 minute' line, the suggestion of a schedule, which made me wonder if time and weight are symbolic.
Much to contemplate -- absorbing piece Colleen.
Forgive my scattered brain 
by Laura doom on June 20 2009