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my extra 20 pounds
(hang) heavy
with each step I sink deeper
in the soft sand
trying to avoid the scattered crabs.
Grammatically, that would be my only nitpick. Is it possible to feel both heavy and empty at the same time? You lead me to wonder.
by Suter Bill on June 14 2009