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First of all I like.
One thing that struck me is the simplicity of your repeated stanza. with few words you say a lot. I'd like to see that a bit more in the other stazas.
I like the repeat of the stanza, it brings it all home.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shannon McEwen on Nov. 22 2008