The Importance of you

Yeh - as Derma says, an enjoyable hive of activity, from the perspective of one serenely inactive.
However hard I try, I can't leave it there, bereft of suggestions. Minor stuff, but I think you could avoid the 'of - of' rep in L6 - 'beauty in his movements' maybe?
I also wondered about the title. It suggests specific 'targetting' for a reason, though as you don't refer to 'a bee' or 'bees' in the poem, 'The Importance of Being' is another candidate, at least in my distorted microworld. No obvious parallel with the 'Wilde' play (apart from playing tenuously with 'being [in the] wild').

Hmm - in retrospect, I like it as is, spared the agonies of my peripheral pursuits :>