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Yeah, fuck you and your moaning about uselessness... at least you can still write. Last line is a bit weak and it won't take much to strengthen -- you might just like to mirror the first more, like "will I matter?"
Also "lanky legged" seems redundant, lanky will do won't it? Or some other kind of legged.
Otherwise... yeah, just stop your moaning will you? It's damn good poetry.
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by Leanne on May 28 2008