Insatiable Adoni

Ya got so many damned poems up, I figured I'm going to review some of them. I mean, shit. Hardly anyone reviews around here. I like the nasty grinding halt this comes to at the end. This has a sense of betrayal and mystery in the beginning- as if the speaker has been lured into a predatory situation. Maybe I'm off the mark. That's my sense. I like that it's ambiguous- I also like that the nasty gets withheld til the very end- like a dog you thought you might pet and then, SNAP! Excellent poem...C