Chang Tzu's Butterfly

oh, i think this is beautiful. i love the first line, though like anstey i'm not sure what it means precisely. well.. it conjures a certain image in my mind but i'm not entirely sure what YOU meant by it.

i googled chang tzu becuse i didn't know who that was, and now i do, but i still don't understand the title really. i'm a bit curious.

but yes. i think this is beautiful. my only suggestion.. make it longer? because i want more. so.. that's not a real suggesiton.