My Neighbor

First, i was shocked, I so expected another of your cheerful kids poems (which I love).

 Althoug to be honest Jen, I have to say I really like the more serious poems you write.

 This poem demonstrates not only your wonderful humanity but your sense of life.

In S3, I think if you added a decriptive word, to bring back the fact that she's using a walker, and her movements are almost slow and painful, it would make it even more dramatic.

----- Life is what happens while you wait for great things.