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Beautiful imagery and it has a lilting music due to the
alliteration and internal rhyme. I found myself replacing
"first" in the last line with "early" - I think because of
iambic consistency (but I can see the connection with Eden
and "first"). I like the constrained Romanticism in this
appealing lyric...BRgds.,Alan.
by U668857 on Apr. 14 2008