Fuck Love Poetry

You know, I had to rereard this one. there's something so sentimental about it. Almost hallmark really. Ok, that's a bit tongue-in-cheek, but seriously, it does have a sort of yearning quality. I'm not wild about the linebreaks, but I see the point. I also wonder about elipses vs. dashes. I struggle with that all the time, do to the realization that ellipses means something is missing, even though what i'm really trying to do is force a pause.