reality ungripped

good job!  but why you ask?  because I like any poem that uses the word "vinegar."  many other good uses of vocabulary as well, though it'd be too much work for me to elaborate any further.  suffice to say, I felt you used language effectively, such that I was propelled to say "good job!"  The content was interesting too, if a bit demented.  On the other hand, I've never been to the "blackets pits of hell" but it sounds intriguing.
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"When defecating or urinating, one must squat in such a way as neither to face Mecca nor to turn one's back upon it." -The Ayatollah Khomeini