I Saw Your Aunt today

There's an interesting slightly stalkery feel to this. I'm not a fan of the exclamation point in L8. The 'scarlet' ... I also wonder about, is she drunk? Is this a surrealist sort of image? In L12, I think you could delete the word 'words' -- it'd tighten that up a bit. I do think the repetitions generally work here, and the end-line is also pretty cool.