Gott Fabrik

ok, here's the thing......I was so challenged by this poem......to think, to contemplate.......because I believe there are different ways to interpret your words......and I love that of a poem.......although [and of no consequence to this review] I completely disagree with the sentiment expressed.....[opium of the masses?].......but you've written an intelligent and evocative poem.......my only suggestion would be to tighten the line breaks a bit, and close them up somewhat......just my personal preference, but by having so many stand-alone lines, it detracts a little from the impact of each......no matter, this is good poetry......Kat