That's an excellent critique, but it's not actually my poem It's by Austin Gorsuch (Aesthetic Psychosis), I just published it for him and it got stuck in my bit for some reason, which annoys me hugely. It's a good poem though, isn't it?
There are no monkeys here. If you're looking for monkeys, go away. Well, actually there are monkeys, but they're of the hairless variety that writes poetry and such. If that's not what you're looking for move along.